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Amazing

"So far, this is incredible. The story has great potential. I was left just wanting to see more of the world. I loved it immensely. Good job!"

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A fantasy adventure

"This story takes you by the hand and invites you to think about the impact we have on the planet. The setting in the future with passion dampened down is an interesting concept and the awakening of the lead female character by the mysterious male is thought provoking and intriguing. I for one want to read the rest."

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