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Methusaleh... defeated

"Although this is part of "The Quest", it's also a short comprehensive story on its own. The author draws you in expertly, and you become immersed in the story completely. Excellent read, as are all of this author's work. "

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Lovely

"Well written from this author as usual. I really like the ability he has to suck you into the story, make you smell, feel, taste and so on - like you are there yourself. Not every writer does this just as easily. I'm a lover of mysteries and romance and this story captivated me. It's a short story, yet the author managed to tell a whole lot in a few chapters. I recommend this along with his other stories. it's really worht it. I sincerely hope you never stop to write, John."

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