Inkitt
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Interesting read!

"This was very interesting and I enjoyed reading it; you can tell you're being given a glimpse into a well-crafted world with a history behind it. It works very well as a prologue or introduction to more, yet could also stand on its own. Overall, I would recommend this!"

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Fantastic!

"For such a short story it manages to perfectly paint a fantastic image of an original fantasy world. The writer nicely sets the scene for what could be a plethora of possibility's within the universe. I found myself wanting to know more about the character, especially if we were to then visit this character in modern times. My overall opinion, brilliant! This is a story that I definitely want to see further explored. A rich universe has been created, now I want to see this characters experience of it."

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