What is your opinion?
PART 2 PLS
"I FREAKING LOVED THIS ENTIRE PART!! ITS JULY PLS PUT OUT THE SECOND ONE!! NO RUSH. THIS IS AMAZING WRITING HDJSJFJEHW ALL LOVE BEING SENT 🫶🏾🫶🏾"
So much potential
"I would recommend this to anybody who isn't afraid of reading a story in its early stages to witness raw talent. If revised with the help of friends, beta readers or a developmental editor, I would see myself buying this in paperback. It was a good read, I liked it. There were some issues with the proofreading, redundant imagery, the word choice for the sex scenes, fact checking and some scenes and events need more development. All things that are easy to fix as a writer gains experience. The plot hits the beats it needs to. A lot of the imagery was poignant here are three examples: "His eyes were so brown they nearly rusted into a red color."(Chapter 1) "The fall echoed throughout the (h)all, sounding like a tree falling to the ground in Maria's ears."(chapter 4) "(...) hurrying to the library as her boots clicked on the wooden floors."(Chapter 5). Seriously these had my writer's senses get good tingles and I couldn't get them out of my head. Congratulation on writing this gem. Please keep writing and keep working on this story. "
Book
"This was an excellent read! Thanks for writing it I can't wait for part two!!!"
The wolves belong underground
"1. Only a few grammar errors and mispunctuation here and there but the plot is on point. I love the characters and their personalities. 2. I'd recommend to a number of my friends and family. 3. Chose this rating simply because it's a great read so far. Loving it!"
review
"You're a great writer, keep it up👍😊"
The wolves belong underground
"Your imagination is amazing I’m so hooked on this story I’m excited to see how everything works out!!"
Ow my ghoosh I’m loving it. My best read so far just my taste
"Absolutely nothing negative all good. 5 Star read "
Mysterious
"I like the story. The erotic content was not as scandalous as the warning had me believe, but overall, I wanted to continue to find out what happens!"
Reader
"It’s very typical story of a maid falling for her master … her character has no depth … didn’t like reading about her … I don’t think I would recommend this novel to anyone … "
