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Forgive us

"Beautiful story, loved it from beginning to end. Thank you for sharing your story with us."

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Forgive Us

"Wow!! How tf could a father say shit like that to his only daughter? Not to mention all the abuse Macey had to deal with growing up not from her father but her older brothers too? That's horrible! Absolutely disgusting inexcusable behavior. I'm really glad she and Asher made up. Yes, he was wrong for not standing up to his father and brothers but he was young too. No excuse, just saying. I'm really glad that Johan was there for her and stood by her side. This is a good HEA story that didn't nauseate me because it also dealt with the abuse factor of life not just that everything was always peachy. "

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Book review

"I loved this book. This author has me wanting more of her books. "

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Great reading experience!

"I cried so often throughout this wonderful story only to end up crying at the end as well! There were many emotional moments and I thank the author for so courageously opening up about domestic abuse. There were many characters that were very realistic and my heart broke for those who were severely manipulated. And hurt. But the ending? Oh that was truly the best. Hence the tears. Healing is such a blessing. Thank you for sharing this beautifully written novel!"

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Just a few errors

"Besides the few grammatical and punctuation errors there was a couple plot points that weren't clear."

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Emotional story

"Well written story. Great characters, who are written realistically with depth and emotion. "

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Great book

"Brilliant book great writing author "

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Forgive Us

"As a DV survivor, this story really hit home for me. It was very graphic, but violence isn't pretty!!! There were a lot of tears (and I do mean A LOT! 😭) while reading this book, but ... I also laughed at the funny bits and cheered the characters on in their heartwarming moments together. Well written, Kyliet!"

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I'm not crying

"That was a very well written story about an extraordinary woman and the trauma she experienced as a child and adult! Thank you for making us all think about what others may be going thru and hopefully adjusting how we treat each other. "

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Forgive Us.

"I hate how Macey was treated. "

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Liked

"Keeps you on your toes toes "

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Forgive Us

"Wonderful story. Keep up the good writing. Thank You for a wonderful book."

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Forgive us

"Wow! Your story had me captured. Macey is such a strong woman. Her so-called father raised his family with hate. I am glad he died."

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Drama and romance ❤️

"This is really a well written story, I enjoyed the plot and it made me cry, laugh and fall in love all at once. "

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Forgive us

"Such a wonderful book i cried, laughed, and felt Macey's pain and fear. This book is well written its very discriptive and feels very real. To the writer.. You book is brilliant. "

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Forgive us

"Great story ! This book hits a lot of sad but relevant issues! Grateful for the way it ended even though sometimes these particular issues don’t end well! "

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Very good book

"The subject is one that isn’t talked about much. Brief and not flowery. Generational abuse is taboo but this story may help bring it to light."

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Tears and smiles

"There are some minor grammatical errors but nothing I can really complain about. This story is filled with abuse and trauma, with some happy moments. It’s made me cry lots. Good job to the writer for being able to get that out of me. "

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Captivating

"It could use more detail in some places but overall it was good "

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Good writing

"This has some really good writing,, but there are things in it might trigger anyone who has suffered trauma. "

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