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Tied to my fate

"A wonderful short story, sweet and an unexpected turn of events. "

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Great short story with a unique plot

"Of all the books I've read on here and Galata, I've never read a story even remotely like this one. The characters had great personalities, except for the one creepy boyfriend. The ending was such a twist that I never saw coming but was super happy to have read. Highly recommend! Keep writting, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work."

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Tied to my Fate

"Soooooooooo gooooooooood"

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Tied to my fate

"This author is an excellent writer. I am so glad I read this short well-told story. In Tied To My Fate, the author explores the themes of consequence and redemption. Life has not been kind to the MC. She is bitter and withdrawn. An evil slimeball tries to take advantage of her and she runs. Runs with nowhere to go. The MC accidentally causes the death of a promising young man and almost loses her life during the incident. But then fate steps in and tips the table over. She is returned to the realm of the living with the spirit of the young man who died tied to her by a string. The string represents our eternal connection to our spiritual selves. She then explores this concept with delicate dialogue. There is a sweet yet sad overtone to her existence after the accident. I will not give away the rest. The author makes us think and consider how life is about making good choices, being true to yourself, and being open to the love that surrounds you. The story will leave you feeling happy. Great read! "

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Short & Sweet!

"I love love love this short story! It has a great and unique plot and the characters have great depth to them! Its ending was perfect and I will most likely read it again and again haha. It’s definitely a breath of fresh air in comparison to the plethora of stories on this app. Much love to the author, keep up the great work! <3"

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