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Malheur de Vivre

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Summary

Dit on que les malheurs ne dur pas longtemps; Ou que aprés la pluie viens le beau temps? Est-ce vraie que les malheurs ne sont point incessant?

Genre
Poetry
Author
Hannah J!N
Status
Complete
Chapters
6
Rating
4.8 4 reviews
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Dit on que les malheurs ne dur pas longtemps;

Ou qu'après la pluie viens le beau temps ?

Est-ce vrai que les malheurs ne sont point incessant ?

Par-ce-que c' est de trops que je leurs trouvent présente.

Elle envide nos vies ;

Se couronne roi dans celle si;

Nous laissant entendre qu'elle finira bien.

Mais c'est en vin, car vous voyez bien.

Que c'est à la mort que cessent les peines.

Comme tout le monde, je décidai ;

De me bercer par tout cela ;

Jusqu'au matin, quand je me levai;

et hier, fus pareille, je me disais.

Toutes ses larmes qu'ils disent valoir de l'or ;

Ne m'ont pas rendu riche une fois dehors;

même sans m'apitoyer sûr mon sort;

Ce dernier me fera pleurer à tort.

Je fouille dans les nouvelle découvertes,

Pour trouver l'antidote de ce poison inerte

Ou devrai-je dire ce parasite interne ?

Mais on a point su comment y mtre un terme.

Même si elle donne mille coups à la fois,

Ce serai juste briser ton être comme la dernière fois,

Donc on se rend compte qu'à force de subire.

On ne trouve plus difficile de sourire. .

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author

There's no such thing as a bad place to publish your work

3 years
author

i hear you sir🙌
👍

3 years
author

Magnifique 👌 Tes mots sont profonds et perforants. Ils nous plongent bien dans la poésie 👏
Magnificent 👌 Your words are profound and punctured. They immerse ourselves in the poetry 👏
I just add a few corrections for some words :
"Les malheurs ne DURENT pas longtemps" ; "vient" ; "trop" ; "celle-ci" ; "vain" ; "mettre" et "subir" otherwise it's perfect ✨

2 years
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