Inkitt
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Dark Romance

"I like how it starts and how it just grips you to want to read more"

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Age gap

"The age gap is crazy pls change it but the rest good need more!!!"

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fantastic

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Good

"Really lie the theme, I ha eso friends who woyld enjoy readigi It! Keep thegood work :)"

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next chpter plz

"yeah I ENJOY ITTTT ALOT AND I LIVE IT"

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Dark romance

"I love everything about this so far "

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The story is amazing so far and that's coming from a girl who loves dark romance but the grammar and wording isn't the best in my opinion

"I don't really like the wording because it said she and instead of and she"

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Very good that's so good

"I like it the age difference is crazy and writing is so amazing and I recommended this story to my friend I like it so much"

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like it

"this story is rlly interesting, love the plot but work on punctuation "

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It's good but punctuation needed

"It very good Plot is interesting "

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Katherine

"I love the characters"

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Let me read first

"Dude let me read the story first then ask for review. I have not even finished chapter 1 yet and how can I review it and also if you wanna know u need to be better at typing coz I got confused like 3-4 times in 1 page "

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Good

"I haven't even read the whole yet but I think so It will be good and I do expect it is good "

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Not very good

"I didn't like all of the run on sentences, and he agreeing to 'Goon' on the date."

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I dont like the chronological event arrangement

"I dont like the event arrangement, it's very boring on the starting, boooooooriiiiiiing let me see how it goes"

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This is p3d0philia

"Take this story down, this is actually p3d0philia. "

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Ummm

"Take this down. A 15 year old is a MINOR."

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