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Greeting And Appreciation Request!!

"Hi, I’m Aliana a professional comic, webtoon, and manga artist with a passion for cinematic storytelling. Your story has the perfect balance of emotion and intrigue that deserves to be visually brought to life. I specialize in expressive, high quality art that captures character depth and dynamic world building. Let’s turn your story into a stunning visual experience connect with me on Discord: Aliana_Jordan."

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Incredible concept

"I loved this book for the compelling world and concept alongside terrific twists I didn't see coming. The sci-fi elements feel real and also like fantasy. Really great and I want more."

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Wow!!

"Such an action packed but captivating read. So many unexpected twists and super well written. Loving every single page!"

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Captive

"Gotta love a dystopia with a sweet love story. It was hard to put it down. "

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Captive

"This book is different from what I usually read, but I’ve enjoyed the story so far. Can’t wait to read the rest of the book."

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Excellent Dystopian Thriller

"5 Stars for this story! A very unique dystopian suspense thriller. Makes you question humanity!"

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Perfect

"Absolutely loved it! The world building and everyhting kept me engaged and interested! "

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Captive

"Loved the book til the end wondering if sequel or that was the end?"

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Brilliant

"I absolutely love this book and cannot get enough of it the plot is so different from anything I have read it’s so out there yet believable at the same time. "

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Captive

"The plot is intriguing and engaging, the alternate world is described in vivid detail. The main characters are well developed and surrounded by secondary characters that are not at all obvious. Absolutely recommended!!! "

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Captive

" Honestly, I love the universe the author has created and the way it's so different to the one we know. I can't say I dislike something about this book, I think the plot is very creative, I love how each character has his or her own personality. I'd recommend this to teens who enjoy a bit of suspense, some romance and a whole lot of action. I think the book is great which is why I gave it a lot of stars but in my opinion the author could improve on her spelling."

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Captive

"This book has the originality of and a style all of its own I've enjoyed every moment of it I was captivated from the very beginning"

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Simply amazing.

"I found this story from another authors reviews, and I love it! Honestly amazing. Can't wait to read more from you!!"

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Captive

"What?? That’s it?? NoOo!! Can’t wait for a book 2! "

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Captivating

"Such a captivating story! The author manages to flip many writing cliches on their heads while developing a world that is intriguing from the first chapter. There are some grammatical errors and a couple of parts which seem to falter, but pick right back up again in the next chapter. I also appreciated the subtle foreshadowing - very well done and not overused. I would love to read a sequel or even see this as a trilogy "

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Captive

"This is one of the best futuristic novel i ever read. The words, the details and the plot itself makes you curious to know what will happen. "

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Captive

"Love it so far! Your writing style is great. Descriptive, yet to the point. The story is action packed and still takes the time to really connect you to the characters. Look forward to reading more from you!!"

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Intriguing Tale

"An excellent story that keeps you wondering what is going to happen next. I couldn't wait to read the next chapter. I highly recommend this tale.well worth reading. "

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Captive

"I liked this book because it's interesting and kept me intrigued and would recommend it to anyone whom likes this kind of reading. I rated it like I did cause I enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more like it."

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Captive

"All I can say is WOW! It kept me hooked from the beginning with real Hunger Games/Divergent vibes. If this was on a shelf in a bookstore I would have happily purchased it! Thank you for sharing your work with us! I don’t normally leave reviews unless something really stands out to me, and this one did! Keep up the good work 😊"

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