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Good

"Good"

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His captive

"I choose this ratting because it's really thrilling story with twisted love and desire "

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I honestly loved it how he was crazy for her then he changed himself because she was getting hurt because of his old nature just loved your plot

"Honestly I loved it.. and I wanna know about arzal and emaan story too"

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Story

"Story is a good read. Great writing and descriptions. Just can’t do any more. It is so bad. I would like to h*** the main character. Like your story author but geez, too much for me. Good writing. Take care! "

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Betrayal

"A erratic love/hate relationship. Violence abuse and betrayal. Suspenseful…can’t stop reading it. Great job author "

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Loved it

"Love the ending "

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Kidnapped

"Very heartbreaking story, with too much abuse. However I am glad that he changed for the better."

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Spice level muah like such a soul warming context it is hope you could get lots of love. Love from me

"Spice level muah like such a soul warming context it is hope you could get lots of love. Love from me"

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Love it Love it Love it

"Loving it Loving it Loving it"

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It's all about time

"I liked that it sounds like a fact I recommend it to no one I rated it that cuz it's so realistic "

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Review

"One of my favorite dark romance....irtaza is exactly kind of character I am obsessed to read about...author has truly justified this genre. "

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His captive ❤️‍🔥

"When u keep a separate app for a particular story despite having storage prblm...u know that the author is killing in the story 😭🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻"

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His Captive 21

"OMG this story is so Suspenseful and Irtaza and Anum are in one heck of a marriage‼️🫣🫢😩 Eventually everything will work out just fine. Happiness will bless them both with love and a fresh start. Brilliant Author ☺️"

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His captive

"i like this book souch because it is according to my taste that is dark genre there is nothing to dislike about the plot the writing the characters the dialogues evrything are on point...even have the English translations in it ..i love it so far waiting for it to complete hehhe the author did an amazing job that's for sure"

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I'm waiting for Next update

"It's a really good book I love it "

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Love ho giya story sy

"I personally disliked that Anum begin rude.But I hope aagy khahani zada achi aur interesting hogi.I liked your story so so so much.Ab ish k baad apki dusri story bhi phrni hy😅.Great efforts keep going♥️"

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His Captive

"What happened to the ending? The epilogue that was supose to be written? I keep checking back and nothing. Did the author just decide not to finish it? "

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