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Not Too Sure About This One

"Story hints at a past that the main character acts like never happened. In the beginning FMC is staring at a ‘hybrid’ they say is named John and he is supposed to be the Alpha. There was no ‘John’ in this story. Also, FMC acts as if she has no idea who Obsidian is, yet many comments are made indicating that she saved him when she was a child. I’m also not a fan of the ‘Alpha’ if the pack being a masochist. Don’t mind the bisexual vibe, but isn’t she the glue that is supposed to hold the three together? I’m really confused and a little disappointed. Hope there is a part 2 that will explain the loose ends. "

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