Inkitt
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Eva

"It was a very sweet story, but it felt rushed. It didn't really convey the emotions. For example, when the girl was kidnapped, instead of panicking, going crazy, and causing a scene, giving in felt strange... His exaggerated relationship with his gay friend was also odd in my opinion."

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Excellent

"Sweet story! I enjoyed it."

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A Very Suspenseful and Hot Love Story ❣️

"Absolutely enthralled with this storyline and how much it keeps me on the edge of my seat ❣️I can’t get enough of it because it’s very engaging, entertaining, and has everything an avid reader needs to stay focused on the writer’s vision ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥🙏😇🙏"

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Wonderful

"Very good!👍 "

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Excellent plot

"Really great plot, I like the twists & unexpected turns the story has. Wonderful and intriguing writing "

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kawaii

"love to see julia again...in a diffrenet universe offcourse. the story was great not to long not to short just perfect. would definetly read more."

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Virgie's Take

"The relationships seem fun-filled and true. Love Oliver's tenacity and patience."

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P.I.

"I enjoyed the concept of the storyline and although the story is short I did like the writing style, but there was definitely room for more story development, especially when it came to the backstory. Her family members and their relationship, and the characters that are woven in their story. I can see a prequel here. That being said , I loved the characters and the well written spicy scenes., and will definitely read more from this author, "

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P.I.

"Wonderful story and another one great female character"

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Review

"The plot,the writing,everything is amazing. I am in love with all the characters 😍"

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P.I.

"Very good story, I love it. You get a sense of the dangers which the police force, P.I. FBI, etcetera, have to go through each day."

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Things that are meant to be, will be

"Beautifully written, strong characters and heartwarming. I loved the bond that Julia and Brian have as best friends. And that she's found found happiness with Oliver. Such a sweet ending for them "

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P.I.

"Love the way the characters interact with each other but was disappointed with the ending it felt like Tina just threw an ending in to finish the story"

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P.I.

"Really enjoyed the story, was refreshing and new. Looking forward to see what else this author has writing. "

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Well.....

"Yeah I should have know that there is no exceptions to the rule when it comes to your stories ..... brilliant like all the others, i so enjoy reading them you are so talented, well done"

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Wonderful

"Love the authors plotline and style of writing. If you are looking for a good read, you need to check this out. This is Galatea worthy!"

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P.I

"Wow...this story was simply amazing and I so enjoyed reading it. It was such a sweet and lovely story."

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Pj by Tina Brant Thompsen

"Great story full of drama, intrigue and love "

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P. I .

"Interesting plot , storyline and characters . I love HEA love stories . Well done 👏👏👏👍👌"

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P.I

"Enjoyed the story! It had excitement and a show of true love and friendship "

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