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Lovely book

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A thought-provoking read

"I'm honestly not really sure how to review this because I'm not sure whether to think of it as a story or as a statement, so I'll just try and lay out my impressions of the work. It was very interesting. I haven't learned a whole lot about the historical subject matter in this work, so now I'm very curious to look into it. You do a great job of showing the horror of the time while not making it over-dramatic. I liked the characters that you put into it and their interactions. I thought the final chapter was especially well-written in the area of character. Some scenes I had a hard time reading because they were so vivid and gritty. I did struggle a bit in this work. I hadn't the slightest idea what was going on until chapter four and was still pretty lost. In places, the writing was very vague and left me confused as to what was happening (this was especially the case in some of the first chapters and in the chapters where there were depictions of battles). I think it would help if you clarified this a little because I spent a lot of the time muddling through and not understanding what was happening. There were some typos in here as well. All in all, it was definitely thought-provoking and left me extremely curious about the subject matter of your work, but I think it needs a bit of polishing.. Good work!"

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