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Please keep writing

"It’s got it all Romance, Action, Mystery 🔥"

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Best book ever 🙌

"Probably one of the best books I’ve read in a long time I’ve always loved the authors books and she did it again with this one amazing read I can’t wait to read the rest of it :) also I read the whole thing on both Wattpad and on Inkitt:) "

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My favorite

"I have read all of the stories on Inkitt from Shay and while I love all of them, I think this one is my favorite. I have loved every minute of this story. The writing is great, the characters are so good. I loved the graphics, it helped to really picture the characters in the chapters. I’m excited for more! "

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Inlove !

"Your writing is so good , I tend to fall in love with the characters , well , at least one of them ! Thank you for writing , I love your way of writing, and the stories are very ' can't stop reading ' level ! "

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But boss I can't kill a hot woman

"Amazing story so far, can' wait for the next chapter. "

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Awesome book waiting for an update...

"Awesome book waiting for an update..."

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None

"I have been reading this great book for a while,and today I just opened it to realized I have never liked the book. I felt so upset for not liking and it really deserves all the reviews it has gotten.This is the first lesbian book am reading and I have to say it's on top . Awesome book you have here."

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Very good

"The plot is very interesting. I am on the edge of my seat, waiting to see how "Yael" will get away with not killing Eve and (hopefully) get their happily ever after :) !This i s great work!"

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😃👍🏾

"I’m loving this book every chapter is good, just hope there will be some development in their relationship or what she’s going to do about the mission next chapters. Wished I could share this book with someone but everyone around me is a homophobe"

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But boss I can’t kill hot women

"Love the story so far would appreciate if you put more chapterss at once "

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okay

"o-ohhhhhh this isn't good"

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But boss I can’t kill hot women

"Thank you ShayZayit for the wonderful books! It’s not easy to find romantic action books that are actually wlw,I put this book as my second favourite after “The Pink Pistol” by Thronesick. Keep it Up Shay! I look forward to reading more of your work.🫶"

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Love it

"Please write more."

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Great

"Thank you for a good story"

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so far so good

"waiting for the next chapter "

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i love the story

"i love the flow and plot of the story so far can’t wait to see how it turns out. this author always writing scrumptious stories fr. bro how long is 20 words smh "

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But boss, I can’t kill hot women

"Amazed on how good all the story’s from this author are! Truly perfection. I’m obsessed with this book, I’m glad a few updates come out weekly otherwise I wouldn’t be able to live! 😂"

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But Boss, I Can't Kill Hot Women

"I like how the author manage to make this kind of story, I like everything about this. I recommend this book to those who like romantic and action storylines. Obviously I rate this 5 star because its interesting."

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amazing book

"this is one of the best written books "

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Love it so far

"I really like it so far, as well as the writer's previous works - which I had the opportunity to get to know. I really like her style, the way she formulates and shows the plot, the characters and what surrounds them. I can only recommend it to everyone."

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