This story contains themes of: child abuse, depression, eating disorders, self-harm, suicide, cheating, assault
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Poetries from a heart that has been broken into pieces.
I am like a ghost
Invisible and cold
I cry for help
Reaching out my hand
Why don't they see me
when I am screaming
Feeling alone
Got noone for my own
I just want somebody
who is proud of me
Somebody who see me
and hear me scream
But in the end
I am just a ghost
Invisible and cold
~Kimiko
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mariedavismd312: This was Avery spiritual read. The last 2 chapters where very disappointing. That was such a let down unless there is a sequel. Burgess should have been punished for what he did. There was no explanation for his hatred for Jeremiah. I figured he was being set but just had the wrong person. I loved ...
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Sophia: Hey!The tension between Gemma and Joseph feels very raw and personal, have you thought about how this dynamic might resonate with readers if you expanded the story into a longer ebook?
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Sophia: Hey Rujuta!Bethany’s obsession with Sunset Boulevard and her rituals feel so visual. Have you ever thought about explaining her 112th movie watch through illustration? I can imagine a comic panel showing her intense expressions and messy takeaway boxes.
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Olivia: Your story has awesome comic potential! I can draw one discounted test page so you can get a feel for my visual approach.Instagram: @oliviaharper_71Twitter: @HarperOliv56351
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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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Elouise33: I loved this short story. One spicy chapter was all it needed to leave me wanting more.
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Miriam0011: It was a pleasure reading and analyzing your writing you’re doing fantastic work. It’s always motivating to see such creativity. Are you working on a story these days?
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Miriam0011: Hi! I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed your story your writing style is truly engaging and unique. It kept me hooked from start to finish. I’d love to know, what inspired you to start writing stories?
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