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Marked

"Wow, this book is wow. I’ve not read anything like this in a long while. The abuse almost made me drop it- I couldn’t imagine such a sick mind but it was too intriguing to leave. It held me spellbound that I had to read nonstop. I’m looking forward to Book 2. I won’t even try to predict what will happen there. This is a good one although I’m sure not everyone will be able to stomach it"

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Marked

"Amazing I couldn’t put the book down first time reading a book like this "

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Marked

"Such amazing writing!! I felt so bad for Angelina!! Freaking detest that monster!! Definitely not for the faint hearted "

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Loved it

"This book is brilliant. The best I have read on this app so far. The ending was great! She found happiness in the end, and he's left all alone, obsessing over it for the rest of his life. Many women in this world don't always get a second chance. My emotions were all over the place throughout. Thank you"

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WOW

"I started not to read it mainly because I was a battered and abused woman for many years but also because it's not my usual type of read. (Werewolves) But after about a week of coming back to it I decided to try it. I'm glad I did! The storyline is wonderful. I could feel the pain and fear with Luna. It's one of the best read I've had. I can't wait for the second half to come out! "

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Captivated!

"The story is hard to read but compelling! You can quit because you want to see Angelina thrive and Ryan down ! "

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Part 2 needed

"Loved it .. next part needed!!!!"

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Really dark content

"I like the story so far, but you might have trouble reading it, because there aren’t any chapters without violence or abuse or any other form of harm "

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Disturbing But Good Read

"Despite the disturbing theme of this book I liked the story and characters. I hope there is a part two. I’m interested to find out what happened with Kris. Will Ryan find them. What happened with his career after she left. Does Ludwig get what’s coming to him? More please. "

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Faster

"I know she writes a lot quick but I’m soo impatient 😭😭😭😭"

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Asap update please

"Omg can’t wait!!!!!!! Please update asap! 🤎🤎🤎🤎🤎"

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Uncomfortable

"This book is in uncomfortable I feel sorry for Angelina and Kris I wish she could just kill Ryan already "

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Marked

"Kept in suspense. Waiting for someone to help her and no one did. "

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Will there be a plot twist?

"This story really keeps me guesisng about what might happen next. I have a feeling Angelina might end up with her captor perhaps have feelings for him, but I'm hoping for a surprise twist. The way Angelina is afraid to escape because of her captor's psychological manipulation and the isolated setting of the house is well-done. He's so twisted, yet I wonder if he'll ever change or if he's just a psychopath. Can't wait to find out what happens next!"

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Pretty good so far!!

"So this is one of the better written stories I’ve come across here. The story flows and is not choppy."

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Good

"Very dark storth but brilliant read"

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Teresa mckee

"Poor Angelina. And Ryan the man you want to hate. I wonder if he will fall in love with her. Or their relationship going to be same as before. I really hope this story has a happy ever after."

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Shocking

"This chapter was...I have no words, I can't think right now.. I was right in thinking Ryan is like his Dad. Ryan has NOT learned his lesson and he apparently underestimates his Dad, still. Daddy Dearest IS a diabolical monster who navigates/lives above the law. A freakin nail biter story"

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I’m not impressed at all

"I’ve read your other books and enjoyed them but I found this way too much. I’m not a prude at all but this was nauseating."

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