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Good story

"I'm loving the story so far"

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Too much hidden

"I started this because it fit the mold of what I have read and enjoyed in the past. However, this story has too much of its history hidden. It makes it unreadable, not knowing the backstory that drives the plot makes it difficult to know why the characters are doing what they are doing, why they believe their steps are the best option. Missing history: There was a great war, what was the War about? It was between the Humans and Shifters, but who won? what are the effects of the war on the overall society? Alpha, Beta, Omega. Why bother with the traditional groups in a shifter tale when they don't act as they normally would according to canon? If chosen mates are a thing for Omega's then why bother with scent matches. The Beta is a corrupted by science Alpha from what the story indicates, what was he like before? what changed with the modifications? They were adjusted to Beta's to drop the population according to the summary, yet why not just remove the Omega's from the population instead? It would seem to be a quicker method. There's too much unknown in this story for me to unravel and enjoy it. So I pass. "

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