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Girl Power all the way !!!

"I loved this story. Great to read a story with little to no errors, grammatical or otherwise. I loved the interesting reversal of the sexes. Not just a few polyandry relationships but a full blown matriarchal leadership society where the women are the bread winners, including all the very dangerous jobs in this setting, and the number of husbands is an indicator of the woman’s wealth. "

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Too Good for Inkitt

"I feel like I'm reading something polished and lovely, with beautiful language and excellent form. This store is a triumph! It reads like an old myth, where Ismar is the cocky hero. Loved it! *Throws flowers*"

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Read it. Is good plot,no much wrong spelling, good love story. Can't wait for next update!!

"All is in write place,the story, the plot,the love story. Just more updates would be nice."

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