What is your opinion?
Totally Plausible
"This little piece is a totally plausible scenario that could have happened if JKR had an ounce of risque in her writing. The Author has given us a beautiful mishap and some interesting emotions to go along with it and any girl would completely understand. Dunno how you do it boys it couldn't deal with that. I would love to write more but spoilers are not my thing - read it"
Harry's Other Wand
"I found this most amusing. I think you blended your story with canon nicely. The idea of the problems presented by the transformation were well thought out. Hermione's discoveries of Harry' physique were quite funny so you hit your target there. The only thing that was a slight detraction was I really think Hermione being the brain I perceive her to be would have anticipated some of the problems especially the shoes. The underwear part would be pretty accurate. I'm no great shakes at punctuation but your story was technically very well done. Thanks for posting - Dementor149"
Funny take on a well-known scene
"I really liked what you did here. My only disappointment is that you've not continued the scene to its possible conclusion(s). At some point, Hermione is going to have to come to 'grips' with what she's experienced and think about what it could mean for her, if she's willing to summon her Gryffindor courage and go for it."
