UPDATE REVIEW

"will read and be back update i have read and heres my review Well what I can say from the First two chapters is that it got emotion... you know? like you can genuinely feel the main character getting hurt by all of this, mixture of confusion like a love triangle... for a hot minute there i thought missy forgot she had a whole boyfriend... who actually loves her... who cares if he plays a lot of games and possessive.. id be possessive over her too cause from what i read and the cover of the book she FINE ASL. BUT! what got me is the fact that Ace gave her a life long Std and think he can just waltz in and earn her back by being abusive and demanding... how dare he? I like the overall plot so far and i really want to see her win in life... I have a feeling that ex will be back ..idk... theres a few grammatical errors here and there nothing too bad but can be revised and fixed. I am exited to see what happens next... and as a new writer I must say this story could be a Hit... just need more reviewers"