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Loooooved

"It was really dark at first and I honestly didn’t think I could get into it. I tried once before and had to put it down but I kept with it this time and I’m so glad I did! On to book two. "

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Love this books from beginning to middle and can't wait till the end Love Facebook! Can't wait to turn the next page at everyone!

"Book is well written. It's kept me intrigued from beginning to end. Can't wait to see what happens"

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Rahil

"The beautiful "

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Cativa

"Gostando da história, de todo o enredo e sim indicaria."

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Great

"I love the style, dialogues, the different characters, the perfect amount of fantasy"

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Okay, I’m sat once again!

"this was such a good, captivating read. i was GLUED. 😭 the author really had a grip on my neck the entire time, ya feel me?! this was dark, twisted, and whew... it truly puts the erotic in erotica. 😮‍💨 the author’s writing style completely pulled me into the story, to the point where i felt like i was actually one of the characters. the different POVs were SO good and made everything feel that much more immersive. the plot? 10/10. every chapter had me excited to see what was coming next. i was SAT. the whole. entire. time. 😭 one of the best authors i’ve come across on this app, hands down. and THANK YOU for recommending this to me!! 🥹🫶🏽 i’m truly so pleased that you did because whew... this was RIGHT up my alley. you knew exactly what you were doing with this recommendation! 😂❤️"

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I can't wait for more!

"This story had me on the edge of all my emotions, from beginning to end! I can see the torment each brother was born with and has within themselves.... and she is the one to quiet each of them and bring balance. I can't wait to read the second book!"

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Great story!

"This is an amazing story so far. The only thing that detracts from it are frequent misspelled words and improper use of apostrophes. Random plural words have apostrophes, making the possessive. "'Enough!' Mom bite's out.'" is an example. "

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Captive

"Bien"

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Captive

"Loved the story was unsure about Xade but grew to love him especially in the second book! It has an amazing plot i was up all night reading because I just couldn’t stop. This isn’t usually the kind of book I read but I loved and and am considering reading more like it! "

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Intense

"Très bon moment de lecture. Assez sulfureux, mais avec beaucoup d'émotions. Une énigme plane sur le personnage central... et une question est posée qui va déterminer la suite de l'histoire. Trop hâte de la lire."

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Good writing

"Check punctuation but the writing, storyline is awesome. "

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I Love this

"I love the characters"

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Loved the story!

"Loved the book, can't wait to read what happens next Thank you author for sharing 💖"

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Captive

"It's an amazing story. I love how Cassiel saved Mila and how he worked with her. I'm not good with word,s but I would definitely read another book from this author."

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Captive

"The way Mila interacts with each and every one of them is amazing it's a great story. I'm thoroughly enthralled in the book so far I can't wait for the next one to come out."

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Great story terrible grammar

"This is a great story. I’m really enjoying reading it. However, the grammar, spelling and use of words are absolutely terrible. I’m not sure if this is because the author’s first language is not English or if it’s just today’s terrible schooling, but some serious editing needs to happen for this story to be excellent. English grammar, etc. aside, I am still loving the story."

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"Great story "

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Captive

"I really enjoyed reading your book. It was different and refreshing. It also kept me wanting more. "

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Niceeee🫠💞

"It started as very dark and I have still some unanswered questions in my mind but as it progresses it become a very soothing story🫠..loved it ..do read ..now starting part 2 asap.😄😄✌️"

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