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I love a well thought out plan

"This story is a crazy ride. It has everything- abandonment , sacrifice, dedication, hope, love, faithfulness. There are a few technical issues but easy to overlook and they do not distract the plot line. I enjoyed this story even when the emotions got too much and I had to fight the feeling I couldn’t face the sadness. Not to much spice just enough to move the plot. I would have loved to know a little bit more about the shadows and why they wanted death, perhaps a sequel? I love a happy ending. "

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