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Mi Cielo [on-going]

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I don't know how we get here, but all I knew we were in a high place which was far from the city. I didn't know there was a place like this. Quiet and only a few cars passing by. I just drive until I saw this and decided to stop over. The view is so amazing. The air is refreshing and so relaxing. From up here, it's so nice to just sit down and watch the stars from the sky. Also, you can see the beautiful lights coming from the buildings and vehicles on the road. You can almost view the whole city here. I'm not fond of things like this because I'm used to taking my ex-relationships to an expensive restaurant but because of this girl, I feel like I want to take her to a place where both hasn't experienced it yet. I looked at the girl who was sleeping next to me. I smiled as I watched her sleepinh peacefully. I removed the few strands of her hair that were blocking her beautiful face. I never thought I would fall in love with her. Imagine, our first encounter was immediately a fight. I really don't like her because of her attitude. It really turns me off but looked what just happened, I was the first who fall in love. I was amazed at how brave she was. She does not allow people to oppress her. That's probably the reason why I love her. I never thought that one day she would be my strength. My source of happiness. I will treasure her forever. Mi Cielo

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
1
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n/a
Age Rating
18+

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