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Brither

"Such a good book"

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Good

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My bully stepbrother

"I love the book! Its to emotolional."

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Very well written

"Brilliantly written and a good story so far enjoying it! Want to see what else this person has wrote love your style of writing "

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Don't go into much detailing try to write it short otherwise it's very good 👍

"Don't go into a lot of details write it short! Otherwise it's good waiting for the next chapter "

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Bully stepbrother

"A very good read"

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Nice writing

"Got me reading "

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Funny and intriguing

"Funny and intriguing... I continue reading it on Dreame"

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My Bully Steprother

"I am curious to see where this is leading, as Caden is obviously working to get her attention anyway he can. I really hope she gets the upper hand."

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exciting to read with so many twisting plot, keep up the good work

"I liked it all nothing more nothing less and recommends it to all my buddies out there"

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Bulling stepbrother

"I didn't like the bulling part but it had it's way of showing how it all can together. It showed how ever family life is different and bring the good and bad together. I would like my friend to read this book. I like the way the writer brought it together to see how it all works."

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Need an update

"I desperately need this story to go on. I am already caught in the dynamics between the 2 main characters "

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So far so good

"So far so good! Hope the rest is great"

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Intriguing

" Quite an intriguing storyline. Intrigued to see where it goes. "

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