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Sweet short story

"This was a sweet short story of two goofballs challenging and daring each other over desserts and coffee (it really made me crave lemon tart and pancakes❤️). Sun and Night were made for each other. Really wish the cafe was real so I can visit it and experience the magic of it. I highly recommend it if you're looking for a palate cleanser. It's the perfect combination of funny, sweet, and steam. "

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A Winter's Kiss

"This story is light, fluffy and endearing with a touch of spice and everything nice. A quick yet delightful read for anyone that enjoys the genre. The story is compact, but conveys a message of acceptance through its charming characters and cozy setting. I sincerely hope the author will continue writing and sharing their work. Go for it readers, you won't regret it."

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A Winter’s Kiss❤️

"This is a beautiful short story, I thoroughly enjoyed reading and highly recommend it. I loved the flirting and instant attraction the main characters Night and Sun had towards each other when they first met. Night and Sun’s interactions with each other are fun, and exciting, they are very likeable characters.❤️"

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A Warming Winter Kiss

"I really loved this little story! Its five chapters of complete adorableness were sexy and funny. The main characters were so cute I could have put them on a shelf behind glass they were so precious! The writer has a very distinctively playful writing style that really just moves the story along with humor and a very fun vibe. Really well done, Author! I really enjoyed this one. Highly recommend especially if you're looking for a quick warm BL story to thaw you out with!"

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"This was really good😊 Thank you for a good read"

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