Customize readability
Aa

General's Daughter

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

Before you read DRAWN, meet Jack. What happened to Jack when he went away? He won't talk about it but his best friend, Ryder, knows something is haunting him.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
16+

Jack's Story

Jack was barely 18 when he joined the military. He was already good looking but a year in the army will make anyone look good. He was 6’2’’ and all muscle with light blue eyes and smooth tanned skin. He was known as a player but really was a sweet guy who just wanted to enjoy his youth. Two years into his first tour, he met Danielle. She was a gorgeous, sweet but sassy woman and Jack fell fast. He loved everything about her from her dark red hair to her contagious laugh all the way down to her dainty little feet that always seemed to be freezing. She was the sunshine in the middle of the storm that was war. That was until the day she was shot point blank while handing out food to refugees. Jack saw it all. The guy came out of nowhere. He rushed to Danielle’s side while managing to put 3 bullets into her murderer. He knew before he reached her that she was dead. In that moment his heart shattered and he knew without a doubt that he’d never love another person the way he loved the GENERAL'S DAUGHTER.

Let RitaRose know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

3

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

2

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

1

Shocking

Good Writing

3

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

1

Compelling Plot

Great Character

1

Great Character

Strong Dialog

1

Strong Dialog

Further Recommendations

The Contract Wife

Lynne: Beautiful story very enjoyable.well done.

Read Now
The Easter Bunny

Lynne: Beautiful short story with a happy ending.luved it.

Read Now
Bloodlines

Ku_Rolet: The novel was good, and I really enjoyed reading it. I love the leads and their bond, but I have one question that confused me. How could Tristan have been dreaming about his mate since he was a child if Omara was already mated to someone else before him? If Kyle had accepted Omara, would Tristan ne...

Read Now
The Argent Wolf (Coming to Galatea)

Victoria: Your characters feel very real and well thought out. I liked that a lot. Which character is your favorite to write?

Read Now
My Horny Alien

Margaret Hines: I’m curious to see how Lily does in her new world.

Read Now
Bear Roberts

Gabby: I’m working with **Lorey**, a platform that turns novel characters and scenes into interactive experiences readers can play.We can help you:- Turn your story into character profiles- Preserve each character’s voice and relationships- Create an interactive scene for you to reviewYour story won’t be ...

Read Now
The Alpha's Exiled Mate

Mokatoka: Say what????? God! Is it over???

Read Now
The Mate he couldn't have

enchanted_shark: Very readable, well written.

Read Now
Silver's Second Chance

Beth Willyoung: This is definitely a great site all the rest make you read and pay this one is the most legitimate site.

Read Now