What is your opinion?
Quite the read!
"I quite like the premise, however a few choice words here and there require some attention. The plot flows well, and the emotion of the characters is adequate with decent pacing of both dialog and setting. I think with a lot more detail the story could be spiced up even more! It is a work in progress, so I trust that there are mistakes, but as a fellow writer, I have overlooked them."
Captivating Story
"I recently delved into a captivating story that held my attention from start to finish. The suspense woven throughout the narrative was masterfully crafted, keeping me eager to discover each subsequent turn of events. The characters were richly fleshed out, leaving a lasting impression. Among them, the antagonist, Gabriel, stood out distinctly. Initially, Gabriel's actions might inspire disdain, yet as his complex backstory unfolds, he becomes increasingly fascinating. Despite his dark actions, Gabriel's character arc was so engaging that I found myself oddly sympathetic but still wanting to punch him in the nose. Once polished with another round of editing, I believe this book has the potential to be exceptional. I wholeheartedly recommend it to fellow readers for its compelling narrative and intricate character development"
Great book
"This book is pretty good. The characters are interesting, and there's good effort in the writing."
The Beginning of An Apocalypse
"This book is actually so amazing it’s one of my favorites I’ve ever read! I really lovve just how much thought and effort gets put into the plot , how much detail is in every chapter , every page every paragraph ect , and how they make you have to think like “ooo I wonder what’s gonna happen next is this gonna happen maybe that?? “ It’s so amazing and the writing style is just mwah it’s so awesome I give it 6 outta 5 stars so far!!!!"
Very great book
"I Deffiently enjoyed reading this one so far! The characters are great, and the storyline is superb!"
Suspenseful with Great Characters
"I just read an amazing story that I enjoyed from beginning to end. The author did a great job of creating suspense and making me want to read on to see what would happen next. The characters were well-developed and memorable. My favorite character was the villain, Gabriel. At first, you can't help but hate him, but then he grows on you. The more you learn about Gabriel and his backstory, the more interesting he becomes. He did some horrific deeds, but somehow I loved his character. The one thing I will say is that although I really enjoyed the story, it could use at least one more round of editing. At first, it read fairly smoothly, but later on, the mistakes became a bit more distracting, and I found myself having to reread sentences and sometimes paragraphs. I think this will be an excellent book once it is fully edited, and I highly recommend the story."
