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Thakur's biwi

"Thakur is a green flag keep writing stories like that"

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Honest Review

"I like the plot, but the story feels very rushed. The smut and all are good, but again, incomplete."

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Thakur's biwi is my favourite

"No grammatical mistakes. Short and crisp story writing. Love the style "

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Good story keep it up...but clear your grammar mistakes and add more emotions to it ok?ok ok ok ok ok

"It is a good story but needs to be edited cause of its grammar mistakes "

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Good

"Its good but there are some mistakes in writing skills"

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Good

"Good sofar just started reading this by chance"

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Thakurs obsession

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I like this

"J like this"

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Thakur's obsession

"This book contains alot of sexy scenes this is what I like. This book does not contain Indian culture like Thakur's wife should hide her face and commonly Thakurs don't want their wives to continue studies.Although it is good book."

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Grammar and the presentation of sentences should be lmore enhanced

"I didn't like the why you presented your story your story is quite good but you have to enhance the presentation of sentences and the grammar as well but all over the book was quite interesting keep it up 😃👍🏻🤞🏻"

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