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Filled With Kindness

Summary

So this is an Undertale fanfic... Kind of. Basically I took the main characters from one of my other stories and put them in Undertale. This does defy canon in some aspects, such as the fallen humans all being adults and not children (aside from Chara), Frisk being replaced by a new character called Yinuo, the different SOULS all being in the Underground at the same time (again, apart from Chara), and the Kindness SOUL being the last human to fall down. Blurb: One by one, Luca's friends have all gone to Mt. Ebott, never to return. With his best friend gone to see what happened, only to never come back, Luca takes it upon himself to save them. Armed with a frying pan, he explores the mountain. He falls into the Underground, and what happens afterwards will surprise him, challenge him... And fill him with kindness. I tried to make this as suitable for non-Undertale players as possible, but there WILL be spoilers for the game, so be warned! TW: Suicide is briefly mentioned in the first chapter.

Status
2yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Prologue


Vivian could cope with everyone else leaving. She could cope with everyone else disappearing.

But Navya's vanishing act sent her over the edge. “I'll be back.” Vivian told me firmly, tying her curly hair into a low bun. “I'll find out what happened to them. I'll bring them back, and everything will be okay.” She sounded like she was trying to convince herself of this as much as she was trying to convince me.

I waited for a month. It was longer than anyone else had waited for the others before they set out to find them. The police searched, but they found nothing but a gaping hole. They deemed it highly unlikely that six different people would fall down there unless it was deliberate. Although they couldn't declare it legally, they thought it was likely consecutive suicide.

I didn't want to believe that. I couldn't believe that. They were distraught, and none of them were mentally perfect regardless. But there were no indicators that they would jump into a chasm to end their lives. And the thought of them giving up… I couldn't cope with it. Maybe normally, I would. But Sajit went there as well, and I...

I snuck into the kitchen, stole a frying pan, and set off to the dreaded mountain. I tried to keep myself calm as I entered the inside. I slowly walked over to the hole. I could feel myself shaking. I was desperately breathing deeply, calming myself down. Suddenly, an intensely strong gust of wind started blowing behind me. It took me by surprise, my feet lost my grip on the floor, and I found myself plummeting down into the abyss. I saw a bed of golden flowers below me.

Then I hit the floor.

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