The Box Has Twelve Sides

Brandy Shipp

16 chapters read

the box has twelve sides

"it was very enjoyable read, i loved the first few sides, they were unlike anything i have ever read before, but for me personally, the last few sides were rather a bit 'dragging' for me and lost my interest. yet it was still overall a delightful read, thank you for sharing, i hope to see more of you in the future!"

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booksfan67

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Lovely book

"Kudos for writing such a masterpiece. I would like to feature your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at cbdoungd876 AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks."

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LinaAngelo

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LINAANGELO NOVELIST JOURNALIST

"The prologue and first side create an immediate emotional pull. The reunion with the old friend is restrained yet deeply uncomfortable, raising the central question: how did a man who once had a family and stability end up homeless? His refusal of the money—and the tears that follow—reveal dignity and loss without explanation. The sudden theft reinforces the fragility of his situation. The illuminated twelve-sided box feels symbolic, suggesting fragmented memory and reconstruction, especially with the subtle Frankenstein echo. A compelling beginning that makes you want to explore the next side."

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The box has twelve sides

"I was about to give up on Inkit. At last an emotionally mature, accomplished and gripping story teller."

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