What is your opinion?
Wow intense
"This is amazing I can’t wait for the next story however I noticed it hasn’t been updated in nearly a year do you intend to finish it "
THE MOST PERFECT BOOK
"PLOT - 10/10 WRITING STYLE - 10/10 GRAMMAR - 10/10 This book was incredibly addictive, with each page leaving me awestruck. It was the first book recommended to me when I opened this app, and it did not disappoint. I can’t wait to see what unfolds in book 2 and whether Gio and Elaine get their happily ever after. Most importantly, I’m excited to see Gio’s tough exterior crack against Elaine’s gentle nature. Kudos to the author—you did a fantastic job with this book!"
14 days with the mafia
"I love the novel i can't wait for book 2 to see what is going to happen between Elaine and Giovanni "
Paintingbears
"Luv it I would recommend to my adult book club "
14 days with the Mafia Lord
"Great plot, exciting characters, story line has kept me glued to each chapter. I can't wait for the rest. "
14 days with the mafia lord
"I enjoyed your story. It doesn't have any major grammar mistakes and the plot twists seem natural. It's a quick read, and everything makes sense. I liked the characters, the soft nature of Elaine and the hard edges of Giovanni. "
Thanks
"I'm liking the story line and would like more. How long do I have to wait for the next chapters?"
Great reading, i am loving the storyline and characters so far. Looking forward to reading more.
"I am enjoying the storline and characters, and i am looking forward yo reading more. Great reading"
Nice
"Takes too long to get through scene."
More
"Great read"
Nice
"This book is fantastic "
14 Days with the mafia lord
"Curious to know when will they realize their feelings are mutual and the chemistry and attraction is there. What is his reaction when he finds out, he has a son with her."
Enjoying
"The story starts good and keeps getting interesting without being long winded. Enjoying the book "
Great but …
"I really loved this book. I loved the plot, I loved the characters, I loved the psychological depth behind the characters. I deeply appreciated the minimal grammatical errors and typos. I am so thankful this author proof reads and edits her own! I was so tired of reading so many stories where authors didn’t do that. The only reason I didn’t give this book 5 in every category is because I didn’t like or understand why she broke this book down into multiple books; besides the fact that I absolutely hate cliff hangers and that is how this book ends with a cliff hanger. I understand when a book is like 1,000 pages and you really need to break the story down to keep your book from becoming a monster… but I don’t understand why she chose to break the book into multiple books when it was only about 200 pages. Granted she may have her reasons… but that was why I didn’t give this book 5 stars over all. "
Per favore
"Ok i actually like the writing style, It s really nice compared tò some other writing on the platform. The only issue i have Is that like others you are using italian all wrong. And It s ok, i understand It s not your native language but It Is so Easy tò ask for proper reference or learn how to properly use online translators :( I dont want It tò be too critical, but do feel free to ask for corrections because It really does disrupt the flow when they Say weird stuff or use the masculine forms when addressing the lady .. and i Guess this disruption affects also spanish knowing readers which are definitely more in Number than US Italians... So again, please double check (PS if someone tells me my insides are "aderenti" during sex i Will Simply start laughing and sto any sort of hornyness on my side xD use "stretta" when addressing the tightenss of female genitalia (gen Italian lol Sorry i m corny). Aside from this small detail i m really liking this :) PS Sorry for capitals and weird stresses but my phone s picking how i write xD too lazy tò change the settings and also Sorry if i was critical but literally every mafia story has butchered italian language and i m like please do the research or ask someone tò double check your findings... i can teach you methods even (i m a translator) "
