Inkitt
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Interesting book

"Looking forward for your more work."

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My Ex-Husband came Back

"Interesting story. Divorced can be bitter sweet. Not sure their are to many that would agree as to how this story went. Sometimes the hurt can be forgiven but not forgotten. Love can be fragile "

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My Ex-husband came back!

"Enjoyed your story "

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My Ex-Husband Came Back

"All in all, this was a good book to read. Except that it repeated what was written a lot of the time.I do thank the author for writing this book. 😊 ♥️😊"

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Unsure To Begin With

"This book was started with uncertainty, yet as it progressed thru the chapters, the book filled with hope came and determination came through. Enjoyed reading their journey and look forward to seeing more."

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You can not build on betrayal

"This story reads like a justification for selfishness. A person who wants the grass on the other side of the fence, never satisfied. Betrayed the second for wanting the first only to betray the first for the second. Classic case of a man who looks in the mirror then turns around forgetting what he looks like. The heart never truly heals from betrayal. It will bleed the first time a date is canceled for a meeting, or he is late coming home. This story is not a happy ending. "

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My Ex-husband Came Back

"This was not one of my favorite stories. "

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Ex Husband Came Back

"Disjointed and repetitive. It’s as if the chapters were each stapled together, dropped, then stacked back together in a random order. How many times did David find Emma? Three times at least in different places and ways. The first chapters are the same., just in different order. This could have been a very interesting story of love lost then found and renewed but it was too disjointed, repetitive and needed a good editing "

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