What is your opinion?
Great read
"I really liked this book to start, even after only reading a few chapters. The author makes you feel specific emotion, which is a favorite of mine, being able to feel something when you read a book. The scene with the daughter and mother and Ray is really sad, heartbreaking and sets the tone for the coming chapters in emotion. Nicely done!"
Family Relationship In The Spotlight ✨️
"Reading the first and second chapter brought a sad feeling to my eyes since this story shows a strong relationship point between a daughter and a mother. The first chapter show the devastation one feel when she lost her mother and the other was how devastated a giril was when she saw her mother was hurting! I love love love my mother and reading these two sad chapters just make me emotional! I think you have a very nice writing style, it is very direct and deep (hence why I felt emotional reading your chapters haha), though there were some technical writing that needs to be edited, it did not disturb my reading experience at all ♡ I thoroughly enjoyed it especially the scene where Jade sang a song to her mother! Awww so sweet ♡ hooefully they both would be okay and can make it out alive!♡"
