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Experiment Number One

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Summary

19-year-old Emerye Mendoza never had a simple life. Tasked at eleven to care for her two infant siblings by her abusive parents, Emerye's one purpose in life for the past eight years was to make sure her siblings remained safe and healthy. That all changed when she was arrested for the murder of her parents and discovered to have mutant superpowers. Now in the grasp of S.I.A, Emerye must decide what she is willing to risk to protect her siblings.

Genre
Scifi/Fantasy
Author
Rose
Status
Complete
Chapters
25
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

PREFACE

From Howe Archives of Document 2-1.

Audio transcript of Experiment Number One encounter.

Reported by Emerye Mendoza of Lusha, Volent.

Submitted by Chancellor Wit of Howe.

Howe Circle. Summer. 2010.

Before I actually sit down and tell you the story, I want to clarify that my recount of my days in the compound might not be all clear and correct. You know, this whole… situation only happened within a time frame of a few months, as I was told. A lot of that time, I was having my head knocked into things, I was exhausted, and I would countlessly pass out. So, my apologies to those who might hear this recording and happened to be a part of EXNO.1 and found that the tales I relay today were everything but the truth. I’m just going off what I remember. Quotes, days, and times will all be an estimate of reality. I am not here to say this is definite.

Anyway, I just wanted to preface that before I got into the nitty gritty. But here we go:

My name is Emerye Mendoza, and I’m here to tell you about my experience as the world’s first M-Gene experiment.

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Hi Rose,

I just finished reading your story Experiment Number One and I loved it so much. Your writing is amazing, and I kept thinking how cool it would look as a comic

I really loved the moment in chapter two when Emerye’s powers first ignite and she lifts the transport van off the ground in a burst of raw energy. The way you describe the metal creaking and her own shock would make an unforgettable comic panel. I also loved the rooftop confrontation in chapter fourteen, where Emerye faces the S.I.A agents under the night sky and her energy crackles against the darkness. Those scenes are ideal for making a comic as they’re so cinematic and full of visual drama.

I’m a commissioned artist and I’d love to draw your story into a comic or manga. No pressure though, I just think your work would look awesome in comic form.

You can check out some of my recent work on my DeviantArt. My username is Ev3Verse. If you’re interested, please message me on Discord. My username there is bennett_lol so we can bring the story to life visually. I’ll be waiting to hear from you.

Regards
Bennett

a year

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