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Amazing

"This novel and one of the best this I read on this app so far its kinda been hard to find a good book ok here that I like because I'm a picky reader and only like few kinds of books so when I find a good one I like I'm hook and I'll read it so much "

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Great story plot

"I like that the grammar is on point and the characters are definitely interesting.! I've already recommended this to any friends and family that enjoy reading. "

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Addy & Matteo sitting in a tree....!

"Good job Iris! I think the author did a great job at making each of the main characters very likable after first introduction to the reader. That's a good skill. I like how the story is going on a good vs. Evil plot between the main characters. Seems like it could really go somewhere exciting as more about the families and law gets into the story. My recommendation to the author is about the POVs. Switching povs is a good idea. However, I think it's better to not repeat the same parts of the story the readers have already read if we as the reader aren't learning anything new. :)"

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