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Do you ever imagine what they’d be like if they met now?

"Wow... the tension between Cassandra and Ryan is so real! I could feel every moment of their hurt and hope. How did you come up with such a mix of childhood memories and adult emotions? Do you ever imagine what they’d be like if they met now?"

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nice explanation

"Hello! The way Cassandra’s encounters with Jay and Ajax intertwine with her demanding hospital schedule creates a rich, character-driven narrative. Have you thought about publishing this as a Kindle novella to explore her emotional arc in a way that allows readers to connect deeply?"

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Rooftop promises

"This book was it for me. I love it,I enjoyed it. It's beautiful"

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Great story!

"Such a sweet story! I'm really enjoying it. "

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Great story

"I would recommend editing the story as at the beginning of the story it was that they had known each other since childhood and seemed wealthy. Then in college they saw each other and were drawn because of their childhood and did the rooftop scene. Then at the end all was about them meeting on the rooftop and nothing about their childhood. "

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Great story

"While I was reading I was completely immersed into it. Great Plot , Writing style is top keep it up "

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Good read, slow burn

"While the book is an interesting read.. the characters are not clearly defined. 60 something chapters seems a bit excessive when the story could have been done in 30. "

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The rooftop promise

"As the author of "The Rooftop Promise," I invite readers to join Cassie and Ryan on a journey that ignites the flames of passion and romance. Against the backdrop of the bustling cityscape, their love blossoms amidst stolen glances and whispered promises exchanged on moonlit rooftops. With each tender moment shared between them, sparks fly, and their connection deepens, reminding us all of the intoxicating magic found in the embrace of true love. Through Cassie and Ryan's rooftop rendezvous and heartfelt declarations, may readers be swept away by the timeless allure of romance and the enduring power of love's sweet promise."

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Rooftop promise

"An endearing light romance story, I thoroughly enjoyed reading.💕"

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