Inkitt
Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Interesting!

"The story is complex and layered but at the same time holds your attention. The language is crisp, and the pacing is perfect. However, I wish that there would be a little more character development for the other background characters, especially Asta. You can also have a small novella on Asta's future after this book ends. I really like the way in which the story is built up, and I hope that it has a satisfying ending. Overall, a big big thumbs up! "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
A very good start

"I love romance, and the ML is HOT. I'll read more. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Great time travel romance!

"I can't wait to see where the author goes with this. Great characters and plot. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
continue

"same here. I would love to read how the story goes on 🥰"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Destiny

"The storyline was very interesting and kept you interested. The character description needed a few more details. Plot intriguing, suspenseful, fun, and heartwarming moments. Destiny's character should be a bit stronger. Growing up in the foster system doesn't make you a weakling. She also has street smarts. She should be stronger than she is portraying."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation