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Amazing adventure tale with twists

"Thank you for creating this humorous tale that included many twist and turns. I love the bunnies and the bunny ruled world. It is so funny that the bunnies captured Satan in a crystal ball."

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Interesting night and day plot

"I'm only in a few chapters but I really like this story already. The woods are a place where people are sent in order to keep monsters from attacking humanity. The main character finds out that night time is much worse than day and has to navigate by meeting allies all the whole trying to escape. There are funny parts along with scary which make it a good balance to me. Again, I love the idea of night being more worrisome than day! It adds a sense of urgency and makes you wonder what is going to happen next. If you enjoy stories with heroic journey and interesting twists, this story is for you! "

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