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Awww

"Sweet mate love🥰 written like they had love a first sight moment 🥰. There were a few spelling mistakes but it was easy to see what the word should have said, so it didn't stop the flow of reading. Thank you for your lovely storytelling 💜"

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Tracey

"Ah that was a really sweet story Thankyou "

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Love of a lion

"Very good. Is there more to the story? Will there be more on the other characters in this book? I hope so"

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Love of a lion

"Great story❤️"

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Love of a Lion

"I love this little short story. It is cute and funny with a little drama thrown in. Thanks for sharing this with us, author. 💞🩷💞"

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Love of a lion

"I really loved this short story. I loved the characters and their personalities. This was a really great story and I enjoyed reading it."

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Love of a lion

"Nice, sweet short story"

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Love of a Lion

"What a cute fantasy story. To run from a cruel stepmother and sister to a twin where she found her mate and true love"

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Love of a lion

"A good, heartwarming read💕"

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Cute story

"It is a cute story. It does need some editing but it was a really good start."

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