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The ruined Luna

"Would like updated chapters quicker"

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Absolutely amazing

"This has been an absolutely amazing read so far! I cannot wait to read more!"

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The ruined luna

"Great story, well written. Can’t wait to read more"

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The ruined Luna

"Very inspiring story can’t wait for more "

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The ruined luna

"This book is raw and real. No sugary pretence or the same as other books vibe. The writer is smart and sharp. The characters are vivid and easy to picture. The plot is intense and exciting. Keep it up "

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The Ruined Luna

"This story is very intriguing! I can’t wait to read the next chapter. The author has done an awesome job leaving the reader wanting more."

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Great book

"Great reading need more chapters "

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The Ruined Luna

"Awesome story line keeps you on the edge of your seat waiting to see what’s happening next cant wait for more to be added to this story "

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Slow burn

"The Ruined Luna is an interesting read. I’ve read 17 chapters and am definitely interested to read more. The beginning of the story pulled me in quickly with Jo’s narrative and history, making me curious about what really happened and what future awaits her in her new pack. Since coming to the new pack, the story builds more slowly but there is interesting plot and strong characters that kept me engaged and invested. I love being able to to read/ see the internal changes going on for the main character, trust being put in her and the relationships building. The characters in this story are all really well written. Each character has their own personality and dynamics with each other (love love love Tripp!!). The author did an amazing job of creating characters you care about almost immediately, especially as it relates to Jo. If you’re looking for an immediate romance, this is not that. At chapter 17, the romance is not yet the focus of the story however we are starting to get signs/descriptions of the feelings. There’s definitely some jealousy and questioning the feelings to themselves occurring. It’s definitely a slow burn, but my guess is once the romance does start it’s going to really pull you in because you really know the characters. Overall, this is a really interesting, slow burn that keeps you invested in the story. The author does an great job at world and character building. "

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Hidden Gem

"It's a little slow for the first five chapters or so, but once you really start to get to know the main character, you become instantly hooked. I like the pacing, nothing seems rushed. Really looking forward to seeing how this goes and I see a lot of potential for a pretty long story. Hats off to the writer."

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The ruined luna

"Very well written so suspenseful "

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Intriguing

"Got caught up in this story from the very beginning. I am looking forward to reading what comes next for Jo. "

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Angie

"Great story so far.. How often do you update? I would absolutely love to finish this to the end. Im intrigued as to why the rogues wanted to turn a human and if she’s special in any other way. Keep the chapters coming 👍🏻👍🏻"

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Review

"The book has a lot of potential. The basic plot is good…some background information on the Alpha’s history with the Rogue would have been nice instead of just a few vague references "

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