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Who Killed Victoria?

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Summary

"Who am I, you might ask? I am the one who killed Victoria Blane, and I am going to tell you why." She knows their secrets, and she knows how far they will go to keep their secrets hidden. The queen of Rivervine had eyes on her, and she knew they were out to kill her. In a small town called Rivervine there lived a girl named Victoria Blane. Abandoned by her mother and abused by her father she built a shady personality. The Queen of Rivervine, feared by everyone at school, knew their secrets and what the students around her are hiding. Will Victoria find out who is out to kill her before she gets killed? Or will her obsession with people's secrets put her in a grave?

Genre
Mystery,Thriller
Author
Jai
Status
2yrs ago
Chapters
38
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

Prologue

Now...

“Quiet, please,” said the judge in a loud voice. “This is a courtroom we’re in, not a zoo.” People kept fighting over the story on the news, in the public, on social media, and even in the courtroom. Victoria Blane’s murder was not taken as a joke, or was it all a big joke?

You guys are new here, so let me run it back for you. In a small town called Rivervine, which was abandoned by its citizens due to a tornado that swept them all away and was refounded by its new founding fathers—The Blanes, The Davids, The Loveborns, and The Roses—lived a girl, or, as I should say, a sassy bitch who thought she owned the world and everyone in it.

That woman is Victoria Blane. Victoria was presumed dead in the summer of 2023, and her body hadn’t been found yet. The story had it that Victoria was killed by her friends. Some say she was killed by her own father, but no one could tell what the true story was until now, but why the rush... let’s put you up to speed.

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