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When Your Best Friend Lies

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Summary

Anne Donava and Jack Traylor have been best friends since they were three. Now, at 17, about to finish high school, Jack starts to talk about Anne behind her back. In trying to fit in with a group of boys at their church, his and Anne's friendship slowly falls apart. When Anne sneaks up on him while the boys are playing Truth or Dare, she discovers how far Jack is truly willing to go. Furious, Anne sets out to prove to him that she is more than she seems and proud of who she is becoming. In a story about new beginnings and bandaged friendships, with plot twists galore, Anne and Jack learn to disregard fake friends and be satisfied with what is right in front of them. NOTES: THE STORY IS MAINLY SET IN A CHURCH/CHURCH CAMP AND CONTAINS CHRISTIAN THEMES. IF YOU ARE NOT OKAY WITH THAT, PLEASE DO NOT READ. IF YOU LEAVE HATE COMMENTS ABOUT IT EVEN THOUGH I HAVE WARNED YOU, YOU WILL BE REPORTED.

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

In Which You Learn of the Characters, Loosely Based on Real People

Anne Vanessa Donava

Likes: being outside, her church/youth group, pasta, sunflowers, math, reading, Lauren Daigle, getting dressed up, trapeze, dancing, and gymnastics

Dislikes: liars, asparagus, bullies, sickness, death

Best friends: Jack, Cathryn, Chloe, Eve, and Mathilde

Looks: Long, wavy black hair, warm hazel eyes, short and graceful, pale complexion

Nickname: Annie (or Butterfly to Jack)


Jonathan Thomas Traylor

Likes: running, reading, Legos, sleeping, strawberries

Dislikes: allergic reactions, hurting people, nuts, Taylor Swift

Best friends: Anne and David

Looks: Short, crazy brown hair, blue eyes, average height, strong, tanned skin

Nickname: Jack


Cathryn Bellis

Likes: fashion, jewelry making, gossip, her friends, teasing her friends about their crushes, Taylor Swift, Lauren Daigle

Dislikes: name-calling, pineapples, inflation

Best friends: Anne and Magdalena

Looks: Medium-length, curly, dark brown hair, green eyes, fair skin, tall, average weight

Nickname: Cat (Katie-Cat to her boyfriend)


Mathilde Lismey

Likes: skin care, Squishmallows, teasing her friends, her phone, Taylor Swift, ramen, her twin sister (Mags)

Dislikes: dry skin, having no signal, getting wet

Looks: Long, straight blonde hair, blue eyes, fair skin, average height and weight

Nickname: Tilda


Eve Lynne Devon

Likes: journalling, calligraphy/lettering, flair tips, eating, teasing her friends

Dislikes: being cold, hats, vegetables, being called Lynne

Looks: Short, dirty-blonde hair, pale blue eyes, average height, slightly overweight, tanned skin

Nickname: None


Chloe Harbon

Likes: cats, drawing, comic strips, being silly, brownies

Dislikes: frogs, dogs, drama

Looks: Medium-length dark curls, dark eyes, dark skin, average height and weight

Nickname: Clo


Magdalena Lismey

Likes: boys, drama, teasing her friends, technology, church, flirting, fashion, Taylor Swift, her twin sister (Tilda)

Dislikes: being called Magdalena, running out of makeup, being ignored (especially by boys 🙃)

Looks: long blonde hair, pale brown eyes, fair skin, average height and weight

Nickname: Mags


David Fisher

Likes: eating, sleeping, his friends, running

Dislikes: girls in general, drama, eating around people

Best friends: Jack. That's it. (Plus his girlfriend)

Looks: Short, sand-colored hair, light brown skin, brown eyes, tall, average weight

Nickname: None (Mr. Fisher to his GF)

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