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Original Story Line

"The author introduces a new storyline. For once, it's not a story I have read before, which is refreshing. The qualities of fated mates are there, but the characters have to overcome a lot before they can embrace it. The character development for the prince is also amazing. But the princess is slowly progressing. I can not wait for her to take a stand against those who are corrupt and cruel to her. I am dedicated to finishing this story and definitely can't wait to see how it ends! Looking forward to more!"

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Good Start

"The author's writing style has a nice flow to it. The characters are well-written. I look forward to more chapters."

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Halos and Thorns

"Kita is a great writer. Strong character development, an interesting plot, and enough suspense that keeps you on the edge of your seating waiting for whatever comes next "

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Oké

"Kan beter. Goed verhaal. Goed plot. Helaas veel herhalingen door verhaal van verschillende kanten te beschrijven "

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