What is your opinion?
Perfect!
"I cant wait to read the rest of this story. I love your writing style and this story keeps me hangin there. I hope you will update soon!"
MAKE ME WANT TO READ MORE!
"Maybe it is because of the short chapters? Or maybe because of the writing skills? Or maybe because the premise of the story? And maybe it is all of the above? What I know is this story is quite addicting! It is only 3 chapters so far and to be honest nothing much happened yet besides the backgrounf of the fae and humans, where fae can take 3 or 4 girls each year to be their human wives in their kingdom. Since it is still the beginning, I cant comment much about the story, besides so far it is engaging and light! Seriously I was breezing through it all and felt a bit sad when the I reached the latest chapter! I want more!!💕 Since the story is still progressing in the early stages, let me tell you about your writing so far. I enjoy your writing so much and I am sucked into the story right away. I notice several long paragraphs in the story. Personally for me I love long paragraphs and also love long chapters so that'd be fine by me haha but some readers in Inkitt like shorter paragraphs so maybe put some enter and divide the paragraph will be better 💕👌 but overall you have done great job and honestly its very entertaining! Thank you for your awesome story and good luck writing the next chapter!^^"
Overall very good
"I think that it's pretty compelling and it's easy to follow along. I liked the whole idea of the fae's going to random villages and reaping along with the Faes picking a human as the future wife of the king. It was a good read and recommend others to give it a try!"
Very strong start
"This first chapter was beautifully written. I can’t wait to see what else is left to come. This world that has been created seems interesting. The character description was also on point and gave you a sense of who the main character was. I’m looking forward for reading more. "
