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Coralia

"This story felt very vivid and immersive. The descriptions of Langkawi and the ocean create such a dreamy backdrop, but what stood out more to me was the theme of wanting a love story that feels meaningful and lasting. There’s something nostalgic and almost fairytale-like about the writing that made it easy to get absorbed into the world."

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I love your writing

"I have learned quite a bit with this story. You are a fanastic writer. Must make that trip to Langkawi again. The story is beautifully written and the imagery is divine. Kudos to you dear Shobana."

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VERY UNIQUE AND DIFFERENT ♡

"Whoa, what a read! I swear everytime I delve into inkitt there are always some unique stories here and there, and this is probably the most unique! Not only focusing on romance, five chapters in you will know why. The author blends some cultures, folklore, foods, and famous places in Malaysia. The author clearly wants to introduce these aspects to her readers through her fabulous writing and I am so impressed! Not everyday I could learn other country's beautiful tourism places unless If I watch TV, but here, omgggg I want to go to this tropical beach myself and enjoy myself in those deep blue aquamarine water!! Tropical country is so so beautiful and IMO they have the best beaches ever! Okay back to the story *cough* I love her writing!! I gotta be honest that this author really seems foreign to me as mostly I read books from the I perspective, but this story looks like it blends 3rd POV + author's knowing so there are times where it feels like the author retells the story to us, you know like in the beginning of the Hobbit movie. Anyway, this is SO SO SO UNIQUE!! I thought it will need a while till I can get used to it by boooyyy one chapter and I am already dying to read next next next! I am curious how this new guy will play a role in story since he only appeared twice so far (he has unique name btw!), and I think Carolia eill definitely get the love story she can only dream of here in Malaysia!♡ Good job author! Splendid work for sure 💕✨️"

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Interesting!

"The book has an interesting start! The characters are also interesting, and I can't wait for future chapters! Keep up the good work."

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Story

"It is a good story, while reading I can imagine the beautiful scenery and you describe that pretty well. I think the story is a little short, feels like maybe their wedding can be placed after a few incidents(It's Only my opinion). And thanks again for the beautiful scenic description."

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