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Appreciation and Commission Request

"Hi! I’m Eloise, a digital artist passionate about visual storytelling. I just read your story and was completely pulled in the emotion, the world, the characters it all played out in my head like a comic. I’d love to collaborate on adapting a scene into a short comic! I focus on expressive characters and impactful layouts, and I think we could create something really special together. I charge reasonably and am happy to share samples of my work if you're curious. No pressure just wanted to say how much I loved your writing and share the idea. Feel free to reach out on Discord: luansousa8287. "

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Mayan moon

"Excellent story, but really, not my cup of tea. Thanks Author "

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Enjoyed Mayan Moon!

"I really enjoyed this story (more than I initially thought I would.) It was fascinating and tasteful. An overall great read!"

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Mayan Moon

"Love how to be grandfather righted his past. A good lesson in be honest about your insecurities and past. Loved the Mayan subject matter. Would recommend it, as long as violence isn't a trigger."

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Build slowly: doesn't slow down

"I loved this book, it starts calmly at first it builds slowly, until you just can't put it down. A must read"

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So far so Good

"I'm enjoying the misery very much"

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Good Read

"Mayan Moon is a good read. The characters are enjoyable. The writer does a good job of incorporating different cultures. The story has good suspense. Each chapter left me wanting to read more. The story line progresses at a good pace. "

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