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The Snake and the Shadow part 1: Unrealistic Expectations (a Harry Potter twist)

Summary

Her entire life, Camilla has been living in her brother's shadow. When she was little, Lord Voldemort attacked her family, killing her parents and leaving her and her twin brother, Harry, stranded. The twins get sent to live with their Aunt and Uncle, where Harry gets treated like a king and Camilla becomes a maid. Now, about to enter Hogwarts, Camilla learns that truly isn't loved, and sets out on a mission to both find some, and prove to her "family" that she isn't quite what they think. When Camilla gets to Hogwarts, she meets Draco Malfoy, a boy who doesn't care about her brother, doesn't care about her fame, and understands her better than anyone she's ever met, and Severus Snape, someone who becomes like a father to her. This story is about a headstrong girl fighting to live outside her brother's shadow. This is a story about expectations and how to defy them. This is a story about how a rich boy meets a famous twin and the thing they become.

Status
2yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Authors Note

Hi! I'm theFantasyGirl.

I am a big Harry Potter fan, and I decided to put a twist on it in this story.

In this book, Harry Potter has a (fraternal) twin sister, Camilla, who looks like Lily Potter. I know everyone turns Harry into Harriet when they gender-swap him, but I thought Harriet was a little, well, just not what I'm going for with this character. (No offense to anyone named Harriet; I have a friend named Harriet too, so I definitely don't mean to be offensive.) Plus, Harry means "home ruler" and Camilla means "helper to the priest" so I thought that could help portray how the world sees her.

Now, I want to make something clear. I despise Draco Malfoy in the books (I haven't seen the movies 😭). But, in this story, I wanted Draco to have a better personality. Partly so it'd be more realistic when Camilla falls in love with him. No one could fall in love with the heartless shell of a monster called Draco in the books. (Apologies to anyone who likes Draco).

This book is part 1 of 7 in my The Snake and the Shadow series, which follows Camilla and Draco's first year at Hogwarts.




This story is about a headstrong girl fighting to live outside her brother's shadow. This is a story about expectations and how to defy them. This is a story about how a rich boy meets a famous twin and the thing they become.

Enjoy!

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Hi theFantasyGirl,

I recently went through your story “The Snake and the Shadow part 1: Unrealistic Expectations” and I loved it so much. Your writing is amazing, and I kept thinking how cool it would look as a comic.

I loved the setup in the summary where Camilla, overshadowed by her famous twin and treated like a maid, arrives at Hogwarts and meets Draco and Snape. That moment is so visually rich and would look incredible in comic form. I specialize in adapting stories into manga/comics, and I’d love to bring your story to life as a comic/manga. No pressure, though, I think your work would look awesome in comic form. If you’re interested in a paid collaboration, I’d love to discuss bringing your story to life visually.

If you’re interested, message me on Instagram (username: digitalstrokes_21) or DM me on DC (username: peterjones_90) so we can bring the story to life visually. I’ll be waiting to hear from you!

Regards
Peter.

a year

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