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Excellent read!

"Wonderfully written story, loved the intrigue ,the build up. Characters were etched out very well. Looking forward to reading more from you esp the adventures of adrian and senar!"

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A Dance at Midnight

"Very good writing! Compelling plot. Sucked me right in"

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"A dance at midnight is an excellent story! Well written, very interesting, and the characters have great build up. Definitely would recommend reading. For the author: I was a little confused on the ending. Everything was all good but the last line confused me. Are Senar and Adrian dead? What does it mean when "2 vampire bodies heal"? I loved the ending though, albeit a little confusing. Thanks for sharing this story :) "

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