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Great story

"So far this is an interesting read and I’m looking forward to seeing where it goes. The writer’s dialogue and characterisation are great too. I’m already invested."

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Oof

"This was a nice glimpse into Haneul's world, but oof. This poor guy clearly has no idea what it means to be your own person. I enjoyed the background you provided, along with how his thoughts keep going between being scared of Jack and Sam and being grateful to them."

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