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Exquisite

"The man dialogue was too prolonged with the boincer"

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🔥🔥🔥

"It was Fire! Loved it!"

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Loads of fun

"Excellent short story, loved it ❤️"

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Banging the bouncer

"I loved the read. "

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Banging the Bouncer

"Love the chemistry between Hank and Christy 🌶🌶🌶 Definitely worth the read "

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Really a plot twist!

"A really nice story. I'd like to see further in your writing style that can capture the reader. The way of emancipation that allows the protagonist is very beautiful. I recommend everyone to read this story! 5/5 for me!"

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Amazing

"This story was written perfectly and wonderfully. For this to be the authors first attempt at an erotica it was amazing"

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Hot Damn

"Wow😍🥵 you had me hooked from the first words! You’re a great writer and this is an awesome story"

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Loved it

"Loved this story it was hot and spicy with a twist. Chrissy and Hank’s relationship was fast paced to begin with but it’s nice you can see something come from it. What a twist at the end! "

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Banging the bouncer

"Loved from start to finish 👏 "

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Superb

"Loved the storyline and shoet n sweet it was, butttt i want moree Please continue with this story"

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Banging the Bouncer

"Enjoyed every second of it A good short read Look forward to reading more from the author"

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Enjoyable read

"This book moved faster than I anticipated and I'm enjoying it"

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